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The Day Of Little Things

(Despise not the day of little things)

"...and he that contemneth small things, shall fall by little and little. "
-Ecclesiasticus 19:1




OBSERVE LAURELINE:

SHE WASN'T A HUMAN BEING,
WHICH IS WHY SHE WAS AN INCH ACROSS.

SHE WAS A MAZZAKEAN, A FAERY.

IF YOU SAW HER, AND SHE DIDN'T NOTICE IT, IT WOULD ONLY BE
BECAUSE OF RARE INHERITED ABILITY, AND
ONLY OUT OF YOUR LEFT EYE, AND SHE WOULD APPEAR TO BE A BALL
OF PALE BLUISH-GREEN LIGHT, ABOUT AS BIG
AS A LARGE MARBLE.

IF SHE NOTICED, YOU MIGHT SEE ANYTHING AT ALL (IF SHE DIDN'T
POKE YOUR LEFT EYE OUT WITH A STICK).

LIKE MOST FAERIES, SHE LIVED IN A GRANITE CLIFFWALL,
BECAUSE OF ALL THE QUARTZ.

THIS PARTICULAR DAY, AS SHE DRIFTED THROUGH THE FOREST
CANOPY, ABSORBING PLANT BIO-ESSENCE, SHE HEARD A DISTURBING
SOUND.

IT WAS A BLOODCURDLING, (IF ONE HAD BLOOD), DESPERATE,
TERRIFIED SCREAM OF SOMETHING SMALL AND ABSOLUTELY HELPLESS,
THAT WOULD SEND A CHILL UP ONE'S SPINE, (IF ONE POSSESSED A
SPINE).

SHE INSTANTLY TURNED HER ATTENTION TOWARDS THE SOUND,
AND JUST THEN, TWO GREYISH-BROWN BLURS SHOT THROUGH THE
UNDERBRUSH DIRECTLY BENEATH HER POSITION.

"THEMS-ONES SHIMMER LIKE COYOTES" SHE THOUGHT, AS SHE
HADN'T SEEN THEM CLEARLY.

SHE WAS CORRECT.

"TWIXT WHITHER AND WHENCE, COME HITHER GO HENCE!" SHE
CHANTED QUICKLY, AS SHE PERCEIVED, IN HER MIND'S EYE, THAT THE
ORIGIN OF THE SOUND SHOULD BE THE CENTER OF THE UNIVERSE. AND
SINCE THE UNIVERSE, BY MERE HAPPENSTANCE, IS FINITE, BUT
POSSESSING OF NO EDGE, LO, IT WAS SO.
PERCEIVING HER OWN LOCATION TO BE THE CENTER WAS
AUTOMATIC, AND LO, EQUALLY SO, (AS WAS MEET).
THUS, HAVING GAINED MENTAL PURCHASE, BY MEANS OF THE
RHYME, SHE MERELY STEPPED FROM ONE CENTER TO THE OTHER. HER
MIND WAS VERY STRONG, AND WICKED-QUICK. SHE WASN'T HUMAN.

DIRECTLY BEFORE HER HUNG A SMALL KITTEN, DANGLING FROM A
TREE BRANCH, BY A CORD ATTACHED TO ITS HIND LEGS. IT WAS
WRITHING AND THRASHING AND SCREAMING IN PURE TERROR.

INSTANTLY SHE PERCEIVED THREE THINGS AT ONCE:
THAT SHE WAS REFLEXIVELY KNOCKED BACK A BIT BY THE FORCE OF
THE THICK, PALPABLE TERROR-WAVE EMANATING FROM THE WRETCHED
CREATURE RIGHT IN FRONT OF
HER, (WHICH THING SHE, HERSELF, EXPERIENCED AS PAIN): THAT TO
ONE SIDE OF HER (THOUGH THEY WERE HIDDEN) WAS EMANATING THE
UNMISTAKABLE, TWISTED-SICK AURA'S OF (PROBABLY TWO)
UNREGENERATED HUMANS, POSSESSING SOME INORDINATELY LARGE
AMOUNT OF IRON, AND THAT FROM THE OTHER SIDE OF HER WERE
RAPIDLY STREAKING IN THE COYOTES, IN A FERVID HUNT-LOCK.--YEA,
THEY WERE, EVEN THEN, ENTERING THE VERY SPACE AROUND THE
TREE, TOO FEVERED WITH ANTICIPATION OF BLOOD TO NOTICE HER,
NOR, (SURELY), THE HUMANS NEARBY.

.--THERE WAS NO TIME FOR THOUGHT--WHAT HAPPENED NEXT WAS
INSTINCTUAL.

THE COYOTES, HAVING JUST SEEN A LARGE, ANGRY BEAR
BETWEEN THEM AND THEIR INTENDED PREY,(HAD IT BEEN THERE
BEFORE?), YIPPED AND VEERED OFF.

THE TWO HUMANS, HAVING NOT SEEN A BEAR, STOOD UP FROM
THEIR BRAKE IN AMAZEMENT. ONE UTTERED AN EXPLETIVE. ONE THREW
DOWN HIS RIFLE, THEN ALSO UTTERED SOMETHING PERTAINING TO
EXCREMENT.

THEY WALKED OVER TO WHERE THE SEVERED CORD HUNG LIMPLY
SWAYING IN THE GENTLE BREEZE.

"DID YOU SEE THAT?"

"YEAH. HOW THE HELL DID THEY SEE US?"

"WIND MUSTA CHANGED. PROB'LY SMELLED OUR SCENT"

"LOOKS LIKE THEY GOT A CHOMP IN. HAVTA GIT US ANOTHER CAT!
DAMN!"

"THEY'RE EASY TO CATCH. PLENTY OF STRAYS AROUND WHERE I
LIVE. BUT HEY, LONNIE, THEY DIDN'T COME
NEAR THE CAT! I WAS LOOKIN' RIGHT AT ' EM, WHEN THEY SPOOKED--
AND THE LINE JUST BROKE!"

"WELL I'LL BE DAMNED! IMAGINE A CAT JERKIN' THAT HARD!"

A FEW MINUTES LATER:

OLD NEGRO, WITH FISHING POLE OVER SHOULDER, APPROACHES THE
RATTY PICK-UP AS THE HYPERCHIMPS ARE BEGINNING TO DRIVE OFF.

"HEY THERE, UNCLE-DIDN'T SEE YOU AT FIRST!-HAVING ANY LUCK?'

"NAW, NOT TODAY, I RECKON"

"WELL DON'T FEEL LIKE THE LONE STRANGER--NEITHER ARE WE, 'PEARS."

GLANCING AT RIFLES IN THE BED:
"YOU BOYS BEEN HUNTIN'?

"YEAH, COYOTES--BOUNTY ON 'EM--BUT THEY GOT SPOOKED."

"WELL--THEY SEEN YA PROB'LY. HERE--WHAT YOU BOYS NEED IS A
GOOD OL' JOHN CONQUEROR."

"JOHN WHO?

"MOJO SPELL POUCH--HERE, I HAPPEN TO HAVE ONE."

"OH RIGHT--HEARD OF THAT--MAKES YA INVISIBLE--RIGHT?"
(CHUCKLE)

"NOT EXACTLY--LET'S JUST SAY--WHOEVER LOOKS YER DIRECTION--
DECIDES TO LOOK THE OTHER WAY."

"THANKS" (TOSSES MAGIC POUCH INTO BED THRU BACK
WINDOW): "STUPID ******" (UTTERS DEROGATORY MONIKER
DERIVITIVE OF NIGER RIVER)

PULLING ONTO HIGHWAY FROM DIRT ROAD--

-GREEN FLASH OF LIGHT FROM OVER AND AROUND PICKUP--

-TRUCK DIES--

-SEMI COMING...

--STILL COMING...

STILL COMING-

-RESTART IN TERROR--BLAST OUT OF WAY JUST IN TIME--DRIVE OFF
CLIFF ON NETHER SIDE OF HIGHWAY:

SEMI DOESN'T EVEN SLOW DOWN


CLIMBING FROM WRECKAGE:
"SHIT! IT WAS LIKE THAT BASTARD DIDN'T EVEN SEE US!"

"HEY LONNIE! I THINK I GOT A COUPLA BROKEN RIBS."

SPITS SOME BLOOD...

"IS THAT A SNAKE?"

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INSIDE THE CLIFF-FACE--THAT WAS JUST
SLIGHTLY OUT-OF-PHASE IN THE SPACE-TIME CONTINUUM...

LAURELINE SET THE KITTEN DOWN AND LET IT LAP UP SOME MILK FROM
AN ABALONE, MOTHER-OF-PEARL LINED SAUCER-

-AND, AS EVERYONE KNOWS--IF YOU CONSUME ANY FAERY FOOD, ONCE
IN TIR NA NOG--YOU CAN NEVER COME BACK.

AS IF ONE WOULD EVER WANT TO.

YOU HAVE BEEN "TAKEN"
AND WILL NEVER GROW OLD.

OUTSIDE THE CLIFF FACE--THE COYOTES ATE THE SHELL OF THE
KITTEN'S REMAINS.

IT HAD BEGUN TO LIGHTLY RAIN.

THE KITTEN CURLED UP IN SOME EIDERDOWN, AND MADE A NEST, AND
BEGAN TO PURR AS SHE STROKED IT.

THE GRANITE AND CHALCEDONY WALLS GLOWED WARM.

"POOR THING, YOU SLEEP AWHILE--THIS IS YOUR HOME NOW.
ACH! SEE HOW KITTY GLIMMER!
I WILL NAME YOU SHIMMERCAT.
BUT YOUR SECRET NAME IS FLUTTER, NO?
NO-ONE WILL KNOW THAT BUT YOU AND ME!

"MOWRRR..." THE KITTEN APPROVED, AND THE FIERCE, WICKED-QUICK
MAZZAKEAN SAW THE RED THOUGHTS.
"THIS IS MUCH NICER THAN THE DUMPSTER" IT THOUGHT.
AND SHE SAW THAT TOO.

SHE TURNED AND DECLINED GRIM.

"NOW WHERE WAS I?"

AND SHE SAILED THROUGH THE CLIFF FACE, OUT INTO THE FOREST
AGAIN, TO PURSUE HER PREY.

SHE HAD MARKED THEM.

THEIR POSITION COULD ALWAYS BE CONSECRATED AS "THE CENTER
OF THE UNIVERSE", AT ANY TIME.

INSTANTANEOUSLY.

BOTH OF THEM.

SEPERATELY...

OR TOGETHER...

ALL EVIL POISONOUS VERMIN WOULD BE ATTRACTED TO THEM

AND ALL BENIFICIENT INFLUENCES WOULD FLEE.

ALL THE FORCES OF MOTHER NATURE WOULD NOW CONSPIRE

FOR HER DESIRE...

THEY HAD TEMPORARILY ESCAPED DEATH.

THIS WAS GOOD.

SHE WOULD NOT LET IT COME TOO SOON...

NOR EASILY.



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THE SPACECRAFT DESCENDED INTO THE
ATMOSPHERE AND DROPPED DOWN INTO THE CLOUDS---



"READY TO TURN ON THE RECORDING OF THE PRIMITIVE JET ENGINES?"
ASKED THE COMMANDER.

"YES SIR"

"ENGAGE. MAKE IT SO."

"WHAT ARE WE DEALING WITH HERE? WHAT IS THE
DOMINANT INTELLIGENT SENTIENT BEING ON THIS PLANET?"

"BOTTLE-NOSED AIR BREATHING MAMMAL DESCENDED FROM A LAND
ANIMAL CALLED A HIPPOPOTAMUS--IT MEANS WATER HORSE---BUT
THIS THING IS CALLED A DOLPHIN--HAS TWO TONGUES IN IT'S
BLOWHOLE, AND SONAR--SO IT CAN CARRY ON THREE
CONVERSATIONS AT THE SAME TIME---ONE OF THE MOST COMPLEX
SPOKEN LANGUAGES IN THE ENTIRE GALAXY. OR I SHOULD SAY
LANGUAGES--AS IT USES A SEPERATE LANGUAGE FOR THE SONAR
SPEACH"

"NEVER HEARD OF SUCH AN EXTROIRDINARY THING! NO WONDER THIS
PLACE IS QUARANTINED!
THEY WARNED ME ABOUT THIS PLANET. WILL IT BE LIKELY TO
INTERFERE WITH OUR MISSION CONCERNING THE ANTHROPOIDS?"

"NO SIR, WE HAVE PERCIEVED THAT IT TAKES NO MORE CONCERN FOR
THEM THAN THEY TAKE FOR THE INSECTS. AS IS MEET."

"GOOD, THEN NOTHING IS LIKELY TO HINDER US!
AND I HAVE A FEELING WE WOULD DO WELL TO EXIT THE PRECINCTS
OF THIS FIELD AS EXPEDITIOUSLY AS POSSIBLE.
I FEEL IT EVEN NOW."

"AS DO I, MYSELF, SIR. IT IS FEY."

"TOOK THE MOAN RIGHT OUT OF MY MOUTH."

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THE SPACECRAFT DOORS OPENED.

A CAGE WITH THE FIVE YEAR OLD BLOND HUMAN GIRL WAS SET INTO THE FOREST CLEARING BEFORE THE KING.

"THANKS" SAID THE GIGANTOPITHICUS, TELEPATHICALLY, OF COURSE.
"MY CHILDREN HAVE ALWAYS WANTED ONE OF THESE CREATURES FOR A PET.
I THOUGHOUGHLY APPRECIATE THIS HELP IN FINALLY QUELLING ALL THE WHINING AND NAGGING.
YOU HAVE NO IDEA!"

"I AM A FATHER MYSELF, YOUR MAJESTY.", REPLIED THE COMMANDER.
"NOT MUCH CHANCE OF THE OTHER CHILDREN HAVING ONE OF THESE, EH?"

"PRECISELY."

"SO THE AGREEMENT IS SATISFIED THEN?
WE HAVE YOUR PERMISSION TO TAG AND MONITOR THE ANTHROPOID SUBSPECIES?"

"KNOCK YERSELF OUT."

"IT IS AN EXPRESSION SIR." VOLUNTEERED THE FIRST OFFICER, AS THEY ASCENDED OUT OF THE ATMOSPHERE.

"YES, I GATHERED AS MUCH."

"OF COURSE SIR, SORRY"

"GREAT MELAETZA! I CERTAINLY SEE WHY THEY CALL THOSE FOLKS BIGFEETS"

I DOUBT MELAETZA HAS ANYTHING TO DO WITH THIS PLANET, SIR"

"AMEN TO THAT, BROTHER"

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THE COMMANDER FLIPPED A SWITCH ON THE INTERCOM.

"GIVE ME ENGINEERING...TECH LAB"

"BOSUN"

"BOSUN, THIS IS THE COMMANDER."

"YES COMMANDER."

"LOOK, WE BOTH KNOW WHO REALLY RUNS THIS SHIP."

"YES, THAT WOULD, OF COURSE, BE ME, SIR!"

"HAVE YOUR MEN GOTTEN ANYWHERE WITH THOSE SPECIMENS OF THAT
ANTHROPOID SUBSPECIES WEAPON YET?"

"WELL, WE'VE TAKEN THEM ALL APART, SIR, AND WE CAN'T SEEM TO
DETERMINE AN UNDERSTANDING OF THEIR EFFICACY COMPLETELY YET
AT ALL.
FROM ALL THE SUBSPECIES TELEVISION TRANSMISSIONS WE'VE
MONITORED, THIS THING SHOULD MAKE ONE VIRTUALLY IMPOSSIBLE
TO HIT WITH ANY OTHER WEAPON.
IT SEEMS TO BE INVINCIBLE AGAINST ANY NUMBER OF CONTINUOUS-
FIRE AUTOMATIC MACHINE GUNS--EVEN WHEN THE ATTACK COMES
FROM HOVER-TYPE AIRCRAFT...OR ENTIRE BRIGADE STRENGTH
ADVERSARIES---EVEN WHEN THEY ARE BEHIND COVER AND THE WEILDER OF THIS THING IS NOT.
BLOW ME DOWN IF WE CAN FIGURE OUT WHY, SIR!
AND SOMEHOW, THEY NEVER EXPIRE THEIR AMMUNITION!"

"YES, SO I HAVE HEARD.
THEY SEEM TO NEED SUCH A THING, BECAUSE FROM THE
TRANSMISSIONS I HAVE MONITORED MYSELF, THE CIVIL AUTHORITIES
WILL APPARENTLY NOT APPEAR ON THE SCENE EVEN WHEN WHOLE
BLOCKS OF BUILDINGS ARE EXPLODED---
AND DEAD BODIES ARE ROUTINELY WALKED AWAY FROM MOST
CASUALLY, UNDER ANY AND ALL CIRCUMSTANCES...
WELL, YOU WILL KEEP ME INFORMED."

"YES SIR"

TURNS TO FIRST OFFICER: "WHAT IS THE SUBSPECIES WORD FOR THAT INCREDIBLE WEAPON AGAIN?---IT SEEMS TO UTILIZE SOME LEVEL OF MAGIC OR TECHNOLOGY THAT WE HAVE NEVER COME ACROSS BEFORE"

"THEY CALL IT A PISTOL, SIR"

"WELL IF THIS SPIRITUALLY CONDEMNED APE EVER GETS OFF THIS PLANET, WE'RE ALL IN DEEP SHIT!"

"AYE, SIR! I SHUDDER AT THE THOUGHT"
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believe, infidel--or i'll stab ye with a pitchfork!
Roman cow
Pussian Hun!
wait'll they get a load of US!

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yer like a stain i can't get out
i tried bleach and i tried Shout
if you were smart you'd go home on B.A.R.T.
before the real trouble starts

OFF OUR TURF, PUNKS!
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OBSERVE:
A DOLPHIN HITLER, (WHO HAD A BAD GUPPYHOOD),
AND WHO WAS FITTED WITH THE RING AROUND HIS BODY THAT
CONTROLLED THE MECHANICAL ARMS, (WHICH WERE MANIPULATED
THROUGH SONAR SIGNALS)...

"THIS'LL GET RID OF THOSE SUBCETACIANS FER GOOD...THEY'LL BLAME
IT ON THE RUSSIANS!
THEN THEIR TITS'LL BE IN A WRINGER!"

REACHES FORTH AND PRESSES THE BUTTON ON THE CONSOLE BENEATH
THE VIDEO SCREEN...

FROM FIVE DIRECTIONS...
FIVE LASERS SIMUTANEOUSLY HIT A THOUSAND ATOMS OF
COMPRESSED HYDROGEN SEALED IN A TINY GLASS BUBBLE WITHIN A
DEVICE SITTING ON THE BANK OF THE LARGER OF "THE TWO SISTERS"-
WHICH ARE TWO ISLANDS LESS THAN A MILE OFF SAN RAFAEL.


BRIGHT FLASH OF LIGHT
FOR A BRIEF INSTANT SAN FRANCISCO BAY IS BROUGHT TO FULL
DAYLIGHT AT THREE AM

A THIN WHITE DUSTING OF LITHIUM DEUTERIDE POWDER SETTLES ON
THE ISLAND AND THE SURROUNDING BOILING WATER

A VAST CLOUD OF STEAM JOINS THE GHOSTLY FOG WHICH IS
ALMOST ALWAYS THERE AT THIS TIME OF NIGHT

EVERY YACHT IN THE MARINAS GOING UP THE CANAL INTO SAN RAFAEL IS BLAZING


THE ONE HOUSE THAT WAS ON THE ISLAND IS GONE

"DAMN!
I WAS AFRAID OF THAT!
IT ONLY GETS TO TEN MILLION DEGREES
I NEED A HUNDRED!
OH WELL...
BACK TO THE DRAWING BOARD
YOKO ONO ALMOST BOUGHT THAT HOUSE
CAN'T WIN 'EM ALL"
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Wow, really original I think ..
Really good

The accents remind of those out of Of Mice and Men ..
v. Good dw

xxxoxoxooxxoxx
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Duhh....
I didsn't mean t to HURT the kitty
I wuz just gonna PET the kitty!
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lol, i felt sorry for curley's wife at the end ...
and lenny
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PattiSmith wrote:
lol, i felt sorry for curley's wife at the end ...
and lenny


Me too, and at the end when Lenny is talking about the rabbits, George shoots him

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Nice story

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Not done yet.
That's basically an amplified outline of various scenes in a book I'm working on.

Stay tuned:

Check back--I should put a scene from the time-leaping lizard chapter in, here, soon, I guess...


The time-leaping lizard chapter is key.
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I gotta get on that time leaping lizard thing
it's HOT
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